Today we learnt about oral health. oral health it is on the 20th march so i did this writting about oral health.
6 thoughts on “oral health day”
Kia Ora Billie,
I love your Oral Health Day writing piece I learned so many facts that I didn’t know before !!
How long did it take you to make the DLO presentation ?
Maybe next time instead of screen shotting the document maybe instead copy and paste and then paste it into your blog post page.
Overall good job keep up the great work
-Lucy
Its Baillie from 21 I love your Oral Health Day writing piece I learned so many facts that I didn’t know before!!
How long did it take you to make the DLO presentation?
Maybe next time instead of screen shotting the document maybe instead copy and paste and then paste it into your blog post page.
Overall good job keep up the great work.
I’m Charlotte from Room 21. I really love your Oral Health day DLO. There were so many amazing facts and you were really adding a lot of detail which is amazing. Maybe next time you could add some pictures or add some colours?
Overall you did a really good job.
Hi Billie,
I really like your Oral Health Day DLO and the facts that I read on your DLO were interesting and I didn’t even know before!
Maybe next time instead of doing a screen shot, you could copy and paste it or you could make a google drawing and like it there so that the readers can read it well.
Although it was very good and I really liked those facts that you put on your DLO.
Have a nice day!
-Vivienne:)
Hello!
good job on Oral Health Day!
I did not know that if you keep your teeth clean, every day a thin shield pervents your teeth from getting gross.
Have you thought of doing more facts to find?
How do you look after your teeth would be a good one.
Good job!
-Ember
Kia Ora Billie I really love your Oral Health day DLO. There were so many amazing facts and you were really adding a lot of detail which is amazing. Maybe next time you could add some pictures or add some colours?
Kia Ora Billie,
I love your Oral Health Day writing piece I learned so many facts that I didn’t know before !!
How long did it take you to make the DLO presentation ?
Maybe next time instead of screen shotting the document maybe instead copy and paste and then paste it into your blog post page.
Overall good job keep up the great work
-Lucy
Kia Ora Billie,
Its Baillie from 21 I love your Oral Health Day writing piece I learned so many facts that I didn’t know before!!
How long did it take you to make the DLO presentation?
Maybe next time instead of screen shotting the document maybe instead copy and paste and then paste it into your blog post page.
Overall good job keep up the great work.
Have an amazing day
– Baillie
Kia Ora Billie,
I’m Charlotte from Room 21. I really love your Oral Health day DLO. There were so many amazing facts and you were really adding a lot of detail which is amazing. Maybe next time you could add some pictures or add some colours?
Overall you did a really good job.
Have an amazing day,
Charlotte
Hi Billie,
I really like your Oral Health Day DLO and the facts that I read on your DLO were interesting and I didn’t even know before!
Maybe next time instead of doing a screen shot, you could copy and paste it or you could make a google drawing and like it there so that the readers can read it well.
Although it was very good and I really liked those facts that you put on your DLO.
Have a nice day!
-Vivienne:)
Hello!
good job on Oral Health Day!
I did not know that if you keep your teeth clean, every day a thin shield pervents your teeth from getting gross.
Have you thought of doing more facts to find?
How do you look after your teeth would be a good one.
Good job!
-Ember
Kia Ora Billie I really love your Oral Health day DLO. There were so many amazing facts and you were really adding a lot of detail which is amazing. Maybe next time you could add some pictures or add some colours?
-Brodie